Once upon a time there were people taking pictures at a forest, then a Taniwha should up in the tall grass and the people went running away from the Taniwha because the Taniwha had long pointy horns,sharp teeth and a long rough tail. His breath smelt like sea water because he has been in the sea water.
Well done Aroha. You are trying very hard to include important details in your story. Be sure to take some time to read what you have written aloud to help you decide where to include full stops. Do you think you could add in some descriptive words (adjectives) to describe your taniwha better?